Note: This story belongs to Dustin Bledsoe. I have uploaded it on my blog for a peer review.
This peer review is for Dustin Bledsoe.
Dustin, I really like what you did with your video. I
enjoyed how you gave a brief history of your life, until you got to Full Sail.
This really helps us to relate more to our stories and how they are similar and
different from yours. It makes me want to go back to my story because I feel
that I can be a bit more specific in certain areas and trim some others. I also
really like how you mixed different styles. The use of photos and animations
kept things varied and are a nice touch. I need to incorporate some variety in
my project.
enjoyed how you gave a brief history of your life, until you got to Full Sail.
This really helps us to relate more to our stories and how they are similar and
different from yours. It makes me want to go back to my story because I feel
that I can be a bit more specific in certain areas and trim some others. I also
really like how you mixed different styles. The use of photos and animations
kept things varied and are a nice touch. I need to incorporate some variety in
my project.
I really like what you did but I was just wondering what it
was specifically that made you choose Full Sail. If it was in your video, maybe
I missed it. Your story was so involving but I had some questions as to your
inspiration for your choices.
was specifically that made you choose Full Sail. If it was in your video, maybe
I missed it. Your story was so involving but I had some questions as to your
inspiration for your choices.
Have you considered going into brief detail about what you
would like to do when you graduate from Full Sail. I think it would make the
story even more interesting and give it some closure. I have to go back to my
story and look into this myself.
would like to do when you graduate from Full Sail. I think it would make the
story even more interesting and give it some closure. I have to go back to my
story and look into this myself.
It seems like the video could be expanded by just a few
seconds and use a bit more detail in places. Perhaps, just a few more images
showing your future goals. Overall, I think you did a great job though. Your
story definitely gave me some great ideas on how to improve my story and I look
forward to changing a few things from my story because of it.
seconds and use a bit more detail in places. Perhaps, just a few more images
showing your future goals. Overall, I think you did a great job though. Your
story definitely gave me some great ideas on how to improve my story and I look
forward to changing a few things from my story because of it.
Sincerely
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